Here On The Ice Flow
I’ve been recording demos of a bunch of songs that I may want to record at some point, and I just wrote this one today and I wanted to show it off. It’s a love song, something I haven’t really written in a while, so I hope it’s good. I tried a few things differently than I normally do, and I want to change a few of the notes that I sing in some parts. Overall, this isn’t what it’s going to sound like, necessarily, but it’s a start and I can figure out where everything moves with it. I hope it’s good! Leave a note telling me what ya’ll think. Also, the MP3 can be downloaded here: http://www.caleborion.com/music/CalebOrion-HereOnTheIceFlow.mp3
I’m a torch and
She’s my cigarette
I will light her up
I’m her vision
She’s my wish and
Sip from the silver cup
We’ll both stay here
In the street, yeah
Flagging down the beat
In the midnight
Of the warm light
Underneath the sheet
Baby winds her body in the soft air
Will she bend or will she break or will she
Run her fingers through my hair
I’ve been losing my mind looking at her
When she’s there, it’s tough luck,
Trying not to stare
I will wait for you
No matter how long you want me to
Just as long as you
Tell me it’s what you want to do
We’re two thin wires
Seperated by
Air that we can’t see
Let the spark strike
And the fire ignite
So that it can be
I’m a lion
She’s a baroness
Let her tame me
From the rat race
And the cat chase
We’ll be freed
Baby turns her head to look and see
I have eyes for her and she has eyes for me
I’ve been looking on for this long now
How can I keep her, how can I let her know
I will wait for you
No matter how long you want me to
Just as long as you
Tell me it’s what you want to do
I’m alone and
She’s at home and
We’re apart
I will wake soon
In my own room
With her in my heart
on July 16th, 2008 at 9:03 pm
That was really good and it was cool that I got to hear it too. awesome job!